Gun Threat Reported at UP Tacloban

Gun Threat Reported at UP Tacloban

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TACLOBAN, Philippines - The university administration, in an advisory posted on Monday, said seven dormitory residents of UPTC reported to the school’s security personnel and the dormitory managers that an unidentified person driving a sports utility vehicle pointed a gun at them as they were walking along St. Niño Ext. across the campus gate." This sentence is a bit long and could be broken down for clarity. For example: "The university administration, in a Monday advisory, reported that seven dormitory residents had been threatened with a gun. The students told security and dormitory managers that an unidentified person driving a sports utility vehicle pointed the gun at them as they walked along St. Niño Ext. across the campus gate."

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The students said the SUV did not stop and turned right at Magsaysay Blvd." This sentence could be improved by adding a comma after "stop" for better flow.

On that same evening the UPTC Security Services Office reported the incident to Barangay 2 officials and the Tacloban City Police." This sentence could be rephrased for better clarity: That same evening, the UPTC Security Services Office reported the incident to Barangay 2 officials and the Tacloban City Police."

The Tacloban City Police are investigating the incident. The school advisory reminded all UPTC constituents to be vigilant and to immediately report any suspicious activity on campus or in the surrounding area to authorities.


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